Laura Purdie Salas

Small Reads for Brighters Days

  • Email
  • Facebook
  • LinkedIn
  • Pinterest
  • RSS
  • Twitter
  • YouTube
  • Home
  • Laura’s Books
  • Poetry
    • Poems Published Elsewhere
    • My Poetry–a Sampler
    • Poetry Videos
    • How To Write Poetry
      • Poetic Pursuits
  • For Teachers
  • Presentations
  • Freelancer
  • About
    • Press Kit
      • Short Bios
      • Awards & Honors
      • Author Photos
      • Book Covers
      • Book Reviews
      • In the Press
    • Who Am I?
    • How I Became a Writer
  • Blog
    • Review Policy
  • For Writers
You are here: Home / Uncategorized / Putting It Out There

Putting It Out There

March 6, 2011 By Laura

As the next step in sharing my Minnesota Brass adventure, I promised to get a bit of video so that you can see what I’m working on if you’ve never seen a color guard before. Also, I’m tired of text, text, text. So one day as the temp hovered around 6 degrees, I took my phone during my driveway practice session. Here’s a snippet of a flag routine:
 
 
In case you’re wondering, it’s supposed to look a lot better than that. Flowy, energetic, coordinated…I would like to use the fact that I’m bundled up in three layers top and bottom plus gloves as an excuse, but the truth is that that’s just a small part of the issues with this.

But I’m sharing it for a few reasons:

1) So you can see what I keep blathering on about.
2) To prove that I actually AM practicing in my driveway. Yes, I am the neighborhood kook.
3) To provide comparison for down the road when I hopefully improve:>)

I’m also sharing it because it seems only right. I get a little impatient with writers who are afraid to share their work for feedback. I mean, everyone gets a bit nervous about that, but if you let fear stop you, how will you get better?

I’m not looking for feedback here, of course–I get that in spades at practice. But if I don’t want writers to be shy about sharing their efforts, I figure I can’t get away with being shy about sharing my own attempts, no matter what the arena.

And I’m wondering…what are you working on in your life (writing or otherwise) that might improve if you share it with others and get some advice/feedback?

Tagged With: drum corps, personal

Share:

  • Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)
  • Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)
  • Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window)
  • Click to print (Opens in new window)
  • Click to share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window)
  • More
  • Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window)
  • Click to share on Tumblr (Opens in new window)
  • Click to share on Reddit (Opens in new window)

Related

« Poetry Friday: Acrocanthosaurus (by me)
Leave It Behind to Improve It? »

MAY NEWS

All 3 of my 2023 books are out now! Thank you to everyone who's celebrated with me, shared the books, or read/reviewed them. <3

Right now, I'm recovering from National Poetry Month! I'm also working on 2 tricky picture book revisions, and I'm preparing for a bunch of speaking events and storytimes! Join Yvonne Pearson and I for two loon-themed outdoor storytimes on June 6 and August 1. And on July 14, I'll be storying up a storm at Robert Trail Library! Hope to see you there!

Are You Looking For…?

  • Poems for the Classroom
  • Poetryactions
  • 15 Words or Less Poems
  • Poetry Activities for Teachers

Tags

15 Words or Less Poems 30 Painless Classroom Poems anthologies A Rock Can Be... BookSpeak! Can Be... books classroom connections conferences and conventions equation poems events free verse haiku imagepoems Kidlit Combos Laura's books Laura's poems my writing process National Poetry Month 2014 (riddle-ku) National Poetry Month 2016 National Poetry Month 2020 National Poetry Month 2021 (#EquationPoem) National Poetry Month 2023 (Digging for Poems) nifty news nonfiction books personal photopoetry poems poemsketch Poetry 7 poetryactions poetry books Poetry Friday Poetry Princesses poetry prompts poetry sisters Putrid rhyming nonfiction rhyming poems Riddle-ku school visits snowman-cold student poems the business side videos Water Can Be...

Meta

  • Log in
  • Entries feed
  • Comments feed
  • WordPress.org

Copyright © 2009–2023 · Laura Purdie Salas · WordPress · Log in